As an experienced developmental editor and proofreader, I will read and examine your story over the course of one month. You will receive:
1) A marked up copy with in-line comments on writing techniques, prose, tone, and flow. This will incude critique, but also praise highlighting your manuscript's strengths and actionable suggestions.
2) A document analyzing the big picture. Character arcs, chapter organization, scene construction, themes explored, and the overall reading experience compared to similar works in your genre.
3) A follow-up with me where we can discuss any of the notes and next steps.